Comments

• June 28, 2008, qazse writes: Great poem and very poignant. The word "allow" is brilliant.
• June 29, 2008, howard writes: It was easy once the image got planted in my head, courtesy of you ;) Tangentially, I've always enjoyed poetry where line-ending words are spelled the same but not pronounced so. That may have fueled the word choice a little.
• June 30, 2008, PJ writes: I second qazse's compliment. I try so hard to ignore the call of the tv, but it's surprisingly addictive.