This is excellent.
Haven't read anything of yours in ages
which is a great shame.
But it think it's because you moved.
You stopped coming up in my automatic reader.

I shall come to read more often.

Thanks for stopping by and reading! That the praise is coming from an esteemed fellow poet/blogger really means a lot.

This site has really only been here (in this form) for a few days now. It's a conglomeration of my more creatively-focused writing from a couple different sites, including the wordpress.com version of this site and my four-year-old blog with the name nobody seems to get.

I'm hoping to keep this one focused on my more whimsical and melancholy sides.

I love this! A LOT! Very unexpected ending, based on the tone of the rest of the poem. And you know I am all about the killer ending!

Very nice work!

Heather

Thanks, Heather! And like I said already in this comment thread, coming from you...