Nicole



Nicole

Just an idle haiku I jotted down while at a local coffee place. The young woman at the counter seems to be there every time I go in, despite the fact she’s carrying 17 college credits. I’m not sure I could do that — even though I did work while going to school, I rarely went above 15 credits in any semester.


coffeehouse Nicole
carries 17 credits
and espresso cups

by howard

November 20th, 2009

  • EllenS

    you spelled espresso correctly!!!
    I hope the honoree is pleased, it's a nice haiku

    and, because I cannot be thrilled enough –
    you spelled espresso correctly!!!

  • http://nonbreakingspace.com/ howard

    thanks, Ellen! spelling espresso is one of the many skills i've picked up through the course of my dyslexic life ;)

    on the other note, i don't know how she feels about the haiku — i haven't returned since it was finished. maybe next time out.

  • EllenS

    that came across differently on paper rather than it would verbally – I didn't mean “YOU spelled espresso correctly” as much as I meant “Thank god someone else out there seems to be able to spell it. ” The X spelling makes me sad. In general I have no lack of confidence in your spelling (although it is frequently a dyslexic problem), No offense meant.

  • http://nonbreakingspace.com/ howard

    i get it. despite the dyslexic experience, i'm also quite critical of other people's typographical issues.

    i guess that's somewhat hypocritical, but now's no time to get sidetracked with my faults — especially when there are so many others out there to pick apart ;)

  • EllenS

    well, I do tech writing (functional specifications for a data warehouse among other tasks) so I need the person proofing my meeting minutes or specs to be critical of my writing and they need me to be critical of theirs (both wordsmithing and typos). That being said, I usually don't play word police as much as it seems outside of work (and get a little lax myself on caps and punctuation), but “espresso” is one of my pet peeves. And you'll note, I expressed glee you were right, not gloat you were wrong. I usually keep my mouth shut on such things if context doesn't warrant it.

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