for a girl in a mall



for a girl in a mall

I’ve always had a strange fascination with scenes that convey sadness, pain or fear. I’m prone to wondering if the emotion I observe is one I’ve felt or could even comprehend. Sometimes when I get caught up in such a scene, I fear it’s intrusive to look, no matter how public the setting.

This one grew from a memory of a girl I once saw sitting by herself, visibly sobbing, in a mall food court some years ago, but the memory was drawn out by a stunning photo I stumbled across on Flickr (which helped spare the sense of intruding, I suppose).


beneath hanging hair
is a smudged path worn by tears,
but what put them there?

by howard

August 7th, 2009

Posted in handwritten haiku

  • apreziosi
    We always wonder the source of the emotion. We can't always comprehend or justify their sadness. Certain thoughts or recollections can make me cry. I try to block them out when I'm in public, but there's a hair trigger when I'm feeling melancholy.

    Consider how you would have thought differently if she were sitting there laughing to herself.
  • that would be interesting too, I suppose, though I've always tended toward the melancholy.
  • PJ
    You're right. The photo is stunning, and I noticed you read the emotions dead on, so maybe you have a skill for these kinds of observations :)
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